Jul 11, 2011

hamari kahaani

college ke starting ke din bade exciting hote hai
mere bhi the..
naye dost bane,naya maahol mila
nd sabse badi baat ek freedom n independence ki feeling
lekin college life ek bahut important cheez sath laati hai
mujhe pata hai mere engineer dost sochenge back ki baat kar raha hai
par main baat kar rha hu college life ke pehle pyaar ki
jo mujhe bhi hua aur bahut jaldi hua
ek hawaa ka jhonka aayaa aur main is tufaaan me fas gaya

corridors mein ghum raha tha
canteen ka chakeer laga kar aaya tha
par kuch khaas man nahin hua kuch khaane ka
ghum raha tha idhar udhar ki ek nazar padi picture style
wo dikhi,nazrein ek dam wapas aayee us par
aur bas usi par aakar atak gai

dil ki dhadkane super fast ho gayee
nd ek aisi feeling se saamna hua pehli baar jisse kabhi nahin hua tha
pehli baar dil yun bekaraar hua
haan yaaron mujhe pyaar huaa
mera pehle pehla pyaar

LOVE at first sight

joke kiya karte the ki if it is love at first sight den pakaaa ladki gazab hogi
she was no exception
but mujhe nahin pata tha wo itni khubsorrat hai
ab,ragging ka tym tha suit me choti baandhe fir rahi thi..
par kuch thaa jisne mujhe kheencha aur aisa kheencha ki main gir gaya pyaar mein
i mean fell in love

aisa laga tha jaise life ke  best pal chal rahe the
n khuda se maanga bhi toh seedha  ki "ae khuda ise bhi mujhse mohabbat kara de"
par wah re hindi picture ke scene,wo nikal gayee n main wahin reh gaya love struck
man hi nahin kiya wahaa se jaane ka is ummeed me ki wo fir aaye na wo lamhaa fir aayeee
background me pehla nasha pehla khumaar bajna shuru ho gaya tha :P

anyways college life me sat sun do din ki chutti milti hai
pehli baar nafrat hui isse
dekha bhi toh friday ko tha
do din ki chutti aur main bechain
kuch nahin kiya do din
nikamma ho gaya
bas unhi kuch palo ko dohrata raha apne zehen mein,yakeen dila raha tha ki sapna nahin tha dost hakeekat thi wo..
khair wakt nikala kisi tarah
sunday ki shaam neha ka call aaya. . .
neha mere college life ki first dost thi
hamari khub patti thi aur ham puri class ki khub lete the
mere bhi maze aa rahe the
amir ghar ki ladki thi
khub aish karaaati thi

maine call pic kiya teesri baar mein
kuch bolta usse pehle hi bol padi..
"movie dekhni hai mujhe,aadhe ghante me waves pahunch"
aur phone kaat diyaa

khair kashmakash ke beech pahucha main
socha isi bahaaane mind divert ho jaaega
par kuch accha lag hi nahin raha tha
ek chote bacche ki tarah feel ho raha tha jisne koi tamanna ki ho aur wo tamanna hi reh gai ho
sochta raha uske baare me ki kaun thi,kya naam hoga,mujhe dekha hoga  ya nahin aur na jaane kitne aur

neha ka message aaya 
"coming in 5"
and wo 5 aur 5 ho ho ke 45 minute ho gaye..

pahunchi wo is ummeed me ki main jhaadunga
but hairaaan ho gai dekh ke ki mere chehre par bas ek smile thi n maine kahaa baith jaa
paani pi rahi thi bech me hi ruk ke boli ki tu gussaa nahin hai kya
maine kahan kyun?
kuch nahin boli

fir maine hi poocha "der kaise ho gai?"
boli rohan se jhagda ho gaya
rohan..
ye naam pehle kabhi nahin suna tha
socha boy friend hoga
maine poochaa
"rohan? tere bhai"
boli bhai hoga tera,mera toh jaanu hai
maine kahaa "accha hai"

boli "arey tujhe kuch puchna nahin,pehle maine tujhe kaha tha main single hu"
tab mujhe yaad aaya ki arey haain keh toh sahi rahi hai
den ye b ehsaas hua ki main devdaas banne ki aur chalne laga tha :P

anyways main poocha "kaun si movie dekhegi"
boli movie ke liye late ho gaya hai
ek ghante mein ghar jaana hai and vaise bhi movie se zyada intrest mujhe aur kisi cheeez mein hain. . . 
teri hawaaiyaan kyun udi padi hai,kal se ek b message nahin kiya na call"

main bola "kuch nahin hua bas energy bacha raha hun next week ke college ke liye"
maine bola hi tha ki usne ek thappad laga diya halka sa jitni zor se hamari dosti permit karti
boli ki bewakuf nahin hun main sab dikha raha hai
kuch toh hua hai n kuch bada n serious hua hai

main bola kuch nahin hua yaar,mood swing samjh le
boli main baat nahin karungi jab tak batayega nahin ki kya hai..
main bhi kuch bola nahin,cofee peene laga gaya aur fir chala gaya uske khayaalo mein
phir r neha hi bol padi
"break up hua hai kya?
arey yaar meri bahut single dost hai setting karwa dungi"

bas neha ne itna hi kaha tha ki meri aanhein ruk gayee uski aankhon ko dekhte huee
bolo hmmm break up hua hai then
maine kahan "tu sach me setting karwa sakti hai?"
boli haaan,mujhe sab rishta.com bolte the mere school group mein

main shaant ho gaya kuch der n aisa ehsaas hua pyaar ke paqgalpane me ki bhagwaan ne sun li meri n apna agent bhej diya
main bola" kisi se bhi karwa sakti hai? "

ab shaant hone ki baari uski thi
ab wo sochne ki koshish kar rahi thi ki kya chal raha hai ye sab. .. . .  . .


to be contd...

10 comments:

  1. Very well Written, The best part of it is its practical aspect.. It happens dude with everyone :)

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  2. @PV
    thanks sir
    bahut dino se soch raha tha aisa kuch likhun
    mind me kuch aa hi gaya aisa
    so finally doing that
    keep on reading and givin feed back :)

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  3. lover boy.....baki sab charecter to jaane pehchane lag rahe hai but ye matchmaker neh kaun hai????

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  4. @naman
    padhta jaa aage ke posts
    samjh jaayega :)

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  5. good work abhinav... narration accha tha... aisa lag raha tha ki tum saamne baith ke bata rahe ho... looking forward to the next post... let me know when u post it

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  6. @dvd
    thanks a lot bhai
    is taraha ka motivation hi hai jo aur accha likh paaunga :)

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  7. y is dis blog in incomplete state....complete it soon...
    bt ya...very nice and writtrn in realistic approach...keep writing man

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  8. brother fir shuru ho gye wid a new story...waise ye real h, i doubt it :P
    nd neha ko padhwaya ye post ;)

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  9. @chele ji
    tu aam kha ped na gin :P
    ye kaam tera hai..
    jitni neha ko jaanta hai sabko padhwa de ye post :P

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  10. @isha..
    ye story aise hi parts me i will keep posting..
    i dnt want ki ek saath saara post karn ke chhakker me choti choti bht saari important baatein miss ho jaayee...
    and thanks a lot :))

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